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Leticia "Letty" Ortiz ([personal profile] leavetreadmarks) wrote in [personal profile] broughtwhiskey 2015-05-26 03:32 am (UTC)

[It's an entire sentence though, long enough to need a comma, two separate clauses on one single topic; and there's a note of something besides bland dismissal, besides detachment, behind it.

Letty's pleasure is more prickly than most peoples', but she nods in approval.
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Much better. I knew you had it in you.

You should try using your words more often, you might actually get what you want faster.

[Not that Letty intends to comply, of course, but she approves.]

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